PDF《2014 年6月四、六级写作高分精讲  高分作文特点 》

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2014 年6月

四、六级写作高分精讲? 高分作文特点? 1.

书写工整? 2. 将拼写、标点等低级错误降至最低? 3. 主谓不一致,乱用词性,句子成分不清等错误不要出现? In recent years, an increasing number of students have ignored the study of Chinese. This obvious phenomina is worth our attention. The causes of this ignorance can be described as follows. Firstly, we are so familiar with Chinese that we don'

t have to study Chinese. Secondly, we are all want to go abroad to study and work. So learning foreign language become much more important than before. Every student spend a lot of time to study English so they have little time to study Chinese. Thirdly, there is a rooted idea that literature is something unuseful to real life, so Chinese study is not necessary. The ignorance of Chinese study has negative influence on the further develop of Chinese students. With weaker Chinese study, their writing skills and spoken expression is becoming much worse. Without a good mastery of Chinese, the students are likely having no deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture. To change the situation, we should emphasize on the importance of Chinese study. What is more, we can advise college and universities to open more course on Chinese literature to attract students! I believe that the deeper we contact the language, we will be more interesting about it.? ? 常见错误分析:? (1)主谓一致? (2)可数名词不能单独使用,前面需要加上 a/an/the/this/that/my/his/your 等限定词,否则就用复数? (3)注意语态? (4)修饰成分? People'

s?reactions?to?this?scene?are?profound?different.? (5)基本搭配? (6)连接词? The?bulk?of?people?maintain?cultural?integration?should?be?promoted,?others?see?a?different?picture.? (7)there?be 句型? There?are?a?host?of?individuals?support?this?newly\unveiled?policy.? (8)代词距离名词比较远时要看它的单复数? Even?many?college?students,?who?have?received?higher?education,?fail?to?comply?with?public?virtues?himself.? -

2 - 4. 用词:闪光词汇,闪光短语? 常用表达的替换? (1)与 人 相关的表达? 许多人? 越来越多的人? 大多数人? 年轻人/中年人/老年人/大学生/小孩? 各行各业的人们? (2)值得我们的关注_ (3)解决这个棘手/紧迫的问题? (4)优势与不足/? 利与弊? (5)对…很重要? (6)对...有益/有害? (7)有回报? (8)重视? (9)? 能够做某事/使某人能够做某事? (10)对…产生积极/消极影响? (11)强调/重视/忽视? (12)和…有联系? (13)出现? (14)必不可少的因素/要素? (15)我认为? 5. 用句:闪光句型,闪光结构.? 必用句型:? ? 1.插入语:如however?/?therefore?/for?example/I?believe? 做插入语放在中间,一般放在主语,助动词 后,动词前,两边分别加上逗号.? ? e.g.? ? Other?individuals,?however,?take?the?attitude?that? …? 2.? 同位语? 互联网这项伟大的发明极大地促进了社会的进步和快节奏的生活. The Internet, a great invention, tremendously contributes to the progression of society and the life of quick rhythm. 3.? 独立主格结构表原因,译为 因为如此多的人怎样. . . -

3 - ? e.g.? 因此如此多的人对手机着迷,所以人们不论做什么的时候都会看着手机? With?such?a?large?number?of?people?addicted?to?cell?phones,?they?would?look?at?their?phones? whatever?they?are?doing.? ? ? 4.? 强调句? It?is? 被强调部分? (主语/? 宾语/? 状语)that 句子剩余部分? It?is?through/?by/?by?means?of?cooperation?that?children?are?aware?of?the?power?of?team?work.? ? 5.倒装句? under?no?circumstances?should?we?do?sth?.? ? 6.? 主语从句? ? ? What?really?matters?is?the?sense?of?cooperation?cultivated?during?the?process?of?playing.? ? What?is?key?to?success?is?the?spirit?to?be?consistent?with?goals.? it?is…that…主语从句? ? it?is?undeniable/?conceivable?that…? it?is?widely?acknowledged?that…? there?is?no?doubt?that?…)? it?is?high?time?that?sb?did?sth? 7.? 定语从句? There?are?times?when….? there?are?places?where…? There?are?plenty?of?reasons?due?to?which? ? 8.? 条件状从虚拟倒装? Were?it?not?for...(were?there?no…),?our?life?would?be...? Had?it?not?been?for…,?our?life?would?have?been…/?our?life?would?be…? 9.? 结果状语从句? ? 倒装? so?+?adj.?+?be?+?subject?+?that?+? 独立句? So?vital?is?imagination?to?teenagers?that?parents?and?teachers?are?supposed?to?/?ought?to?leave?room?for? their?creativity?and?initiative.? 10.? 比较状语从句 The?more…the?more…?