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第二篇? 构思成文?

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图表(给一句话作文)描述? 首段构成:描述

图表(引出题目所给句子)+点明意义+个人观点? (也可放到第二段开头)? -

4 - 第一句:? As?is?clearly?depicted/revealed?in?the?picture,?...? As?is?graphically/starkly?shown?in?the?cartoon?,...? This?picture?features?a?scene?that...? ? As?a?popular?saying?goes,? 文章句子,?which?means…..? 第二句:点明意义? (1)? It? is? abundantly? clear? that? the? cartoonist? intends? to? impress? us? on? the? huge? importance? of_ (2)? It? is? glaringly\evident? that? the? cartoon? speaks? volumes? about? (3)Apparently,?the?picture?is?designed?to?spotlight?a?not?uncommon?phenomenon?in?current?society? that? 第三句:表明观点? As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?the?significance?of?can?never?be?neglected.? ? 实用模板? As? is? vividly? illustrated? in? the? picture? above,This? picture? highlights?the?importance?of?As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?this?opinion?is? considerably?revealing?to?both?individuals?and?the?society?as?a?whole.? ? ?

(二)第二段的段落拓展? 对于一个社会现象或问题,我们可以谈论其严重程度、普遍程度、产生的原因、造成的影响、以及 应对的措施等.若是去谈论一个人的基本品质或者价值,就可以谈论这种品质或价值所带来的好处、我 们应该怎样去做才能符合其要求,以及适当的例子等等.? 主题句+拓展句+结尾句? 1.交代时代背景(经济发展,社会进步,科技发展等)? (1)Thanks?to?advances?in?society?and?science,?...? (2)As?Chinese?economy?surges,?...? (3)Thirty\plus?years?into?reform?and?opening?up,?the?Chinese?society?has?reorganized?itself?in?a?way?that?puts? excessively?high?premium?on?economic?growth?over?moral/quality?education.? (4)As?an?ancient?land?enjoying?a?splendid?civilization?spanning?over?5,000?years,?people?don'

t?place?a?high? priority?on?moral/quality?education.? (5)We?focus?on?economic?growth?so?much?that?environmental?protection?has?been?put?on?the?back?burner.? -

5 - 2.强调某物的重要性? (1)The?nature?of?21st?century?competition?favors?those?with?confidence,?I?would?argue.? (2)Confidence?is?of?supreme?importance?to?one'

s?success.?Put?in?another?way,?one?could?hardly?taste?success? without?it.? (3)Independence? is? truly? the? fundamental? attribute? of? top\performers,? which? separates? the? high? achievers? from?the?rest?of?the?pack.? (4)It?is?no?exaggeration?to?say?that?honesty?constitutes?the?very?force?that?has?propelled?human?civilization?in? the?course?of?human?history.? (5)Cultural?integration?provides?a? huge?boost? to?the? sound?evolution? of?a?nation.?Put?in?another?way,?it? is? cultural?integration?that?pays?off.? 3.分析原因? (1)This?prevailing?trend?is?down?to?a?huge?number?of?factors.? (2)The?blame?also?rests?with?the?overemphasis?placed?on?economic?growth.? (3)You?may?wonder:?What'

s?behind?the?current?trend?? 4.举例论证? (1)Take?South?Korea.?Thanks?to?decades\long?emphasis?on?honesty,?the?country?has?earned?a?growing?respect? from?across?the?world.? (2)Take? Yao? Ming,? a? legendary? towering? basketball? centre.? His? stunning? success? stems? largely? from? his? persistent?emphasis?on?perseverance.? (3)Take?Steve?Jobs,?the?late?Apple?co\founder?who?sticks?to?the?belief?for?his?life?time?that?independence?comes? before?victory.?Without?it,?he?couldn'

t?have?built?Apple?into?an?incredibly?successfully?company?with?a?string?of? successes?that?no?one?else?can?rival.? (4)?To?name?a?well\known?example,?Sigmund?Freud?ushered?in?a?new?era?of?modern?psychology.?Due?to?its? self\assurance?and?perseverance,?he?is?today?recognized?as?one?of?the?most?influential?psychologists?in?history.? (5)描述某个问题、趋势或现象(其影响并分析忽视该趋势的后果)? (1)In?recent?years,?food?safety?has?ranked?as?a?top?public?concern?in?China.? (2)This?a?sorry?state?of?affairs.? (3)But?traditionally?cultural?integration?is?dismissed?as?unimportant.? (4)Due?attention?to?food?safety?would?put?a?nation?down?the?right?path?to?success.? (5)If?this?trend?runs?rampant?without?being?curbed,?we?will?inevitably?be?faced?a?gloomy?future?of?lagging? behind?and?getting?eliminated.? -